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Monday, June 1, 2015

How To Write Action In Your Book! (A.K.A How To Make Awesome Fight Scenes!)

Shelia-"How Dare You Cheat On Me!"

1- Don't Over-Explain! (So you know how authors have fight scenes that are all sudden but still explanatory.) like- Shelia saw her boyfriend's hand being held by another girl at lunch. so with her blood boiling and her rage blinding her vision, she marched with in human speed right over to Mike and Pitch-slapped him. (You see this fight scene is clean and easy. that's how they should always be.)



Reader- "How is That a Fight Scene!"

2- Don't Under Explain! (You see some writers under explain fight scenes.) Like- Shelia saw boyfriend with another girl in front of her, and went and slapped him. (you see if you explain a fight scene like that.) Your readers will be like-    








"Let's do this!"


3- Now Make The Epic Fight! (You need to make it awesome. Like for instants.) Saneck stepped forward weapon drawn. John feeling his power surging through his body began to glow. His rage grew more and more as the pain from his wounds continued to build up. He was not going to go down like this, not this way. So with John's last amount of strength he stood up and roared-    

 

As always hope this tip helps you guys out. Also sorry for the lack of post, been sick. Please comment if this tip helps you guys, if you like any of  my likes, or if you just want to talk.

Sincerely Your Reject-Teen Writer,

                                                                       ARI 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 












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